My wife got me a book for Christmas. It's the book that inspired the movie I have already seen and loved. And, I love the book.
There is one section of the book though, where I felt the writer went off the tracks just a bit. Have you ever listened to a song that went on one too many lyrical clusters? A movie that had a scene or two that was unnecessary? A book that veered off path for too long?
What's too long? When do you come up with the final note, chapter, or verse?
Writing anything is subjective to the author so there's no right answer. But, there's a feel. Hemmingway once said "If I started to write elaboratively...I found I could cut that scrollwork or ornament out and throw it away."
Far from it for me to judge someone else's pacing, flow, or rhythm...or when they direct us to the final chapter. I only go here for my own growth.
Thought it was interesting.